Voted For: ...Apocalypse...

Big Pappa76: i think this was a good attempt for a first topical but it just wasn't good enough, i don't like how u basically wrote about hell, and when did satan start sending peeps into limbo?, i figured he would keep them in hell, it was ok, structure was pretty good, ok flow, some good wordplay, i was lost at the 1923 part (???), elevate a lil more and u could be good


Apocalypse: i like how u seperated heaven and hell, there susspose to be seperated cause they r different place, killer wordplay, nearly flawless structure, flowed great, good vocab too, i enjoyed reading it.


vote: Apocalypse

no hate, return the honest votes peeps, battles r in my sig

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