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Old 10-09-04, 12:38 PM   #18
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Voted For: Nostradamus

aight this was one of the best battles i've seen..heres the break down.......poet(Nostradamus) your verse was nice good vocab good story structure a great opener and a strong closer......overall---->9.5/10

one band man......your verse was good also you had good vocab and a opener...but you kinds started to fall towards...THE ACTOR.....your story structure was good but started to good down also....your closer was good but could of been better..overall---->9/10

v/Nostradamus
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