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Old 10-09-04, 01:00 PM   #21
SubtleTee
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Leave ya Neck Rattled Ya Verze was Garbage and you had no punches shows ya Chest's Fragile.....
Kid's got Audio and Text comfused Wack Muhfuckah pickin up a MIC ina Text Battle.....
^ Hmmm, no real punch here

Shit Talkin at 46-15 Ima leave this Bitch Chalked..punches make ya ReFraze ya Verze like takin back ya Lip Talk.....
Dancin to the Next Round ya Wack kid so take this L..Cause my punches will make this Crip Walk.....
^ Crip lines = played. Not a very good punch at all

I Bless Geeks..Make ya Chest Bleed...And Im takin you outa round one...So i can just battle the Next Weak.....
You Bring Less Heat then a Pawn as a Chess Peice...So Watch how i get Siminilla for eatin this fuckin Fresh Meat.....
^ Mediocre wordplay, you mispelled salmonela, not even recognizable

This battle is like Bush vs. Afghanistan, You bringing knifes while I’m Packing rockets.....
Cuz Carson quick to Lose matches like Smokers with Holes in their pockets......
^ Afghanistan line is retarded, smokers thing aight

Its Been three hours since I took the call-to-blaze and no longer do I fall-to-haze.....
Like wanting calendars near toilets...., you wont show,.... just stall-for-days.....
^ An okay closer

I could Lag lines, Rewind, And still your behind...
Your the reason RV look's like the Dolphin's FrontLine-
^ Aight NFL punch

Just leave, Trigga...your a waste of DNA stream's..
Everyone agree's, It's like you an Thuglife traded IP's-
^ I don't get it, but I'm relatively new to RV

Bitch please, Don't "LOL" at me. We all can read your drop-
Get half way down...turn around...all agree, and stop-
^ Heh, an audio kind of punch, but good

Just like your Glocks....Desciple your "ghosted"...
I'm still tryna figure the logic, In why you posted-
^ Nice punch here

If you figured win...You must have mixed your division...
Cross-multiplied your thought's, an hoped sum dik'rider's listen
^ Nice closer


Disciples verse wasn't that good, he had weak punches and nothin that made my jaw drop. He needs some elevation on his wordplay and metas. Carson's verse was more audio-oriented but he had much better and much stronger punches.

Vote- Carson
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