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Old 10-09-04, 05:38 PM   #13
Triple_N
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good battle.......

King solo.....your flow was on point, your structure was on point an you were creative in some of ya lines but your punches were lagging...mostly becuz u worded a lot of them wrong...they were so close to be rela hard hitters a lot of times if the wording had been right....personals there wasn't many an none was strong...vocab coulda been better an u coulda threw some multies in there.

God......your flow was jus t as good as his....structure was jus as good....but punches u were somewhat better. Your opener wasn't dat hard but best line in whole battle....personals same as him not really any jus a few an didn't do much damage...vocab coulda been better an some multies would have brought out ya verse more...ya closer was fair, but your opener won the battle for u in my opinion.

Good job by both...no hate...jus honesty

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