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Old 10-09-04, 05:55 PM   #11
Efusive
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Stephen Elwood...

Check in was whack, man you must have some big will,
Cause when he plays the loser circle.. its just piggy in the middle,
ehh not hard.
Above you dude, so i dont play with them tricks,
And saying your worth? is just for a kid with a lisp,
not hard...dont like it much
Not good, neevr respected, your just plain whack dude,
Your writtens get people laughing...... at you.
played, weak

Socrates...

you have no chance son, imma destroy your senses
put a bat against your glasses, and 'contact' lenses
weak.
its not that when 'woods' dropped nobodys there...
everyone sees it but nobody really seems to care
blah...weak
sorry stephen its done, and no its not a lie
i just took you out in the same box you occupy
dont like it.

both came weak and i dis-liked about the same amount of lines
in both verses, im going to give this to Socrates for coming
a bit harder...he wins by a pinch, Stephen Elwood you came
with blah lines that i didnt feel as much, guess i likes soc's
better...harder overall verse....blah........


V/ Socrates.
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