Voted For: Lyrical Disciple

my flow got u thinking ur comin from all around the world//
im more dizzee than the rascal an im clockin yo girl//
ur mad cause a 14 year old is rippin u with lyrics//
give me a hot beat an im balls deep in it//
mother fucker ur claimin 2 be a disciple//
my rhyme scheme delightful//
if u think of wut i could do 2 u its frightful//
i will bitch slap u jus 2 show ur a queer///
u lit off 1 beer steppin 2 me wantin 2 battle with no fear
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT U NEED TO WORK ON PUNCHES DIS VERSE DIDNT HAD NO PUNCHES,,,,,,,,GOOD FLOW THOUGH,,,,,,,,BUT DA PUNCHES WERENT HITTIN HARD ENOUGH,,,,,,,,PLUS USE PERSONALS



ya think you "hott" untill you loose this battle
i aint even spit at you dawg and you already rattled
you think you "untouchable" like elliot "ness" but its a disguise
beware when i spit cuzz it will hurt ya eyes
you aint "defined" you a pussy
unless you want to get beat nigga dont push me
nigga you must be "def"(deaf)
after i beat you in this battle better show respect
tha lethal rhymes hit you like a sing from God
dont fuck with tha Lyrical Disciple for i "clean you up" like i was a "mod"
you hangin on a very "fine"(check his name) line
dont try to reply to this for a damage ya mind
tha verses you spit aint hittin ya shit aint "hott"
ill come threw stuntin take all tha money you got
retarded as nigga you belong in special "ed"(de-fine-ed)
im hittin this hard and will leave ya mind brain dead
my style spread quicker then aids
when im done with you like Nelly you gone be wearin band aids
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT DIS AN GOOD VERSE HERE U HAD PERSONALS AND PUNCHES AND FLOW NICE GOOD PIECE

LYRICAL-HAD PERSONAL AND PUNCHES BUT ELEVATE USIN PUNCHES MAKE SOME CREATIVE ONES ALSO


HOTTNESSDEFINED-USE HARDER PUNCHES AND PERSONALS THA FLOW U NEED TO WORK ON,,,,,,,BUT IT WAS COOL,,,,,,THA MAIN OBJECTIVE IS TO WORK ON PERSONAL AND PUNCHES

V-LYRICAL CAUSE OF HARDER PUNCHES AND PERSONALS AND FLOW

~PEACE~

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