Voted For: Verbal Phenom

voting for Verbal.....

Verbal has a nice drop, his punches hits hard, he had nice flow and structure, nice wordplays and vocab, and etc.....it's not his best but still pretty tight....the only negative thing I'm gonna say is that even though you had nice flow and structure, your lines are pretty stretched...for example...

This Fag Is Burnt Out Leave Him Twisted With infinitely Exposed scars(17 syllibles)
This Battle Is A Farce The Only Time u Be On A Roll Is Sitting In Shopping Karts(22 syllibles)

otherwise you had a tight drop, keep doing ur thing

While Diablic(spelling?)'s verse, you could use some more sylliebles into your verse, some of ur lines was stretched hard out compare to the 1st line of your bar....

your punches are played, and you definately need to fix your structure and flow....and only newbs leave spaces between each bar....

so I'm voting for verbal for a better overall verse

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