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Old 10-10-04, 01:00 AM   #22
BIGPAPPA76
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Voted For: *+*ludacris*+*

... i didnt wanna give this one to luda because ya structure sucked man, imma tell ya plain and simple... no hate tho... but then i read X's verse and i had to vote for luda... first off in a text battle "competition" and "fun" dont really flow togeather, then the next line u rhymed it and it... not very creative man... then u tried to rhyme MC Shit with Bitch... dosent rhyme.... your closer u rhymed Bye with Bye... i got one word for ya hommie... ELEVATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that shit was wack to tha fullest... now this aint a hate vote im just tellin ya that u aint goin no were unless u elevate man big time.... luda takes this one with better flow, wordplay, punches, personals, metas (not many)... basicly all around, all luda needs improovment on is structure.... no hate X bu elevate man....

VOTE- LUDA
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