I liked this, thought it was blunt and forward and that come well to effect, the concept was well described and well thought... Flow was used with good amounts of multies and kept syllable perfect, more internal rhymes woulda made it better... The vocab was aight, simple and it helped with the little amounts of wordplay, thought you coulda made the piece longer too, feeling what you saying though... Keep em coming and elevating...

Peez...