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Old 07-18-02, 08:15 AM   #5
RhetoriX
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Yeh this is nice and is hella true, mosly to the texters, im a texter on here, but do audio... It was strong and powerful on some lines and deep in others... The rhyme scheme was quicc, come acorss well, sometimes found it choppy, more multies woulda been nicer... Wordplay and technical words worked well together, your technical words were important here and ya combined em well in your verse... This is nice, good concept and well explored, keep spitting and elevating...

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