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Old 10-10-04, 01:28 PM   #16
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Voted For: hotshh!

Imma Give This To Hot....

Thug: Structure Was Kinda Off And Stretched In Places. Flow was Aight Though. To Be Honest Ya Punches Were Weak. Nothin Great Here. Work On Ya Structure And Try Addin Sum Wordplay Or Metas.

Hotshh!: Structure Was Near Perfect Nicley Structure Verse. Flow Was Perfect, Nice. Mulites Were Tight. Punches Were Nice. Had Some Dope Wordplay And Metas too.

Example:Sticks An Stones Kill...Swing swords like Ive Known Bill
'THug' Called Me out? Im 'Off Da Hook' So pay Ya PhoneBill!!
Lol^ Nice Shit Man.

Vote: Hotshh!