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Old 10-10-04, 03:28 PM   #9
For$akeN
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Voted For: D. Cepth Shun

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wut de fuck iz a d septh shun//
im stickin a gun up ya bum//
this line made me think your gay1/10
hbbling along cuz i cut off ur legz when u tried 2 run//
i rhyme for fun//
syllable count way off and non-effective 0/10
an u r not my bitch like dope an forsaken//
u fat pig im guna eat u like bacon
1/10 god...in battles your supposed to diss
your opponent not me or dopeman 2/10


overall: 1/10

Animals make better songs than him, like a fucking Oriole….
Fag though he was slick, trying to copy lines from the tutorials.
da da doo....about a 6/10
His record doesn’t define hot, cause his record is a losing one.
Ya records ugly, and if you elevated you still wouldn’t Gruesome.
wordplay nice again....6.5/10
Posting fucking wack shit, and in this battle you not even ready.
I mean Mental Murderous got tired of you, he banning you Already!
nice personal effective....7/10

overall: 6.5/10

vote: d.cepth shun
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