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Old 10-10-04, 04:45 PM   #7
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DopeMan
um shotta had weak stucture but he had nice punches...a few vocabulary not bad verse orgainize yer stucture adn flow dawg...then you'll be fuckin dope man...word...yuo won easly tho dice was also off on stucture but you were closer and dice flowed better but you still had better punches...

Dice:
you had an aight verse not good enough to win tho...you had flow..better flwo then shotta but yer sturucture was way off...man...trey fix that add some vocab in derr you would be dope dawg...make yer punches better to eleavate realy thatsall to say...

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