Voted For: oreo

Oreo
ahhh oreo elavated a lil flow... nice... stucture alright..man you fuckin elavated dawg your vocabulary pretty tight dawg complex shit work on punches and wordplay and try fix your structure a lil and you would be hella dope...like man you had attepts to punches that were aight i like your opener poising to be a moderator nice you played him dawg...

S.T.R.O.B.E
um stucture good...flow...good...your punches weak your opener how oreo is a cookie ya fell ay bit it was out played lol...your vocab you have none wack shit dawg no ofense but that was weak needs bad work lol...

VOTE: Oreo

return the favour hurr...
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