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Old 10-10-04, 05:45 PM   #4
Triple_N
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Ok first thing I noticed about this song is the beat...the beat was ill.....quality of this track was great.....all your lyrics were decent...1st guy had no flow was so ever but his delivery was decent.....2nd guy flow was better still not great but a decent spit...JP flow was fair but his delivery was nice...I liked the anger in ya voice it fit track well....4th verse donr by first guy had same weak flow....an that outro was wack might wanna cut that...hook wasn't good it seemed over processed...too many effects an jus didn't flow well wit track not a bad track overall a 6/10 jus some remastering an tweeking of ya lytrics an wit this beat it would be a great track.
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