this was a very dope piece....the imagery was a vivid as it gets...it's like i was there...syllably count, vocabulary..were both near flawless...this was a very well thought out piece....maybe OM of the month?

there was a part or two where i felt the flow was kind of interrupted...and it was distracting...

The whisper spread for & wide, another hole for us to hide..
..& decide..
..whether we have the strength to live on, or curl up & die
A Nazi General taking suicide as an option, this is more or less
He'd never confess as this was in his heart the perfect & best..

maybe it's just how I read it...but that right there is where i thought you kind of botched it up..but it doesn't take away from the luster of this piece...it's not significant enough...but what am i sayin? you already know this....anyways

very very dope piece

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