Damn..I was really feelin this piece a lot..You trasnferred your emotions really well to the reader..Just your wording within bars was immaculate..it all sounded so good..really well written piece...If I was that girl, no matter what you had done to make me angry, I would have to find it somewhere in me to give you another chance after reading this..sweetness n realness to a rhyme..feelin it...much propz..stay up n keep blessin us.
peace.