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Old 07-18-02, 01:11 PM   #14
ShaYneA
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LMAO@ you al lsayinf dont sleep thats all this site does lmao............anyways tik n histre............very nicely done ima point out a few parts:


I'd love to execute and just be-head-her//
But it was my beatiful mind that fed her//

nice fave part from you histre...very nicely kinda blunt and forceful but it was nice and vivid

The clock tics by faster and faster, and im trapped in its world /
Some many things happening at once my head has already twirled
^ nice tik........showed a link to rushing and i liked it had a real world appeal to it was very nice......

overall i liked teh wat tiks verse was layed out better than histre but histre had the topic going better
also why the hell dont more boys collab together grrrrrrrrr makes me angry an also NICE PEICE boys sorry yal lgettin slept on but thats what rapbattles is known for..........peace HAZY
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