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Old 10-10-04, 10:30 PM   #1
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From: Bronx, NY
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lmfao

one sided battle
dont got enough posts to vote...
i heard hottness boasts about how good he or she is, please dont boast, for real, i dont think its safe in your position

flow-schema, good flow every aspect was better then hottness so he got this one

punches/personals-schema, wayyy better punches nice, hottness elevate A LOT more no hate but truth u really got to

creativity/vocab/ANYTHING else-schema, way more creative then hottness "ima fuck ur sister she suck on my cock" lines
props to schema

no hate good luck to both peace
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