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Old 10-10-04, 10:39 PM   #16
Mc DeaTh.
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Voted For: GKillaz

Okay, Lyrically slammin this cat into into the sidewalk...
Thought ya record was a str8 path youve come to a fork...
Didnt rhyme....2/10

See nigga ive got more protection than a pack of durex...
Ya rhymes couldnt get no tighter if they wore spandex....
Decent.....5/10

Introducing verbal venom, viruses and toxins.....
Hitting ya wit flurries like we was boxing.......
Decent.......4/10




Accepting this battle was this kids first mistake...
Your fake, My punches leave ya wit the worst ache...
Nice Opener....6/10
Like a first date dawg your all scared and nervous...
Now your embarased, like gettin spilled on by the service...
Nice Punch....7/10
Everyone lookin at ya..peakin..start to laugh-at-Spect...
Lossin streak gun stretch longer than a giraffe neck...
Nice Closer..6/10


Overall Spectre: 11/30
Overall GKillaz: 19/30


Nice punches from Gkillaz and Spect had a nice structure... work on ur punches spect.....
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