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Old 10-10-04, 11:14 PM   #15
Mistic-Rogue
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Voted For: Mc DeaTh

you say u can own others? thinkin u tha greatest
crying about being harasses u Rv's most hated
^^^nice opener, 7/10
it went from Forsaken,Dopeman,Str8, now its my turn
u still couldnt be 'hotness' if i take gas n let u burn
^^^^good isea, bad execution, 4/10
u wack.. ya rhymes are shit... u could be 'defined'
u got owned by forsaken..sayin u the best...u must be blind
^^^fair closer, 6/10

good verse, total for mc death, 17/30, good job!

fukk diz mc he gonna face hiz death//
runnin out of oxyen at every breathe//
^^^theres no punch in that, first line could have set up a good punch, but there was no punch so it was bullshit! 1/10
im da last real nigga left an diz bitch is owned//
thinkin he hot cuz he parentz wanted 2 bone//
^^^same shit, no punch here just random ryming, 1/10
his dady lickin his toez n momma givin him dome//
like ludacris sed cry baby go home
^^^na, flow was off and still no punch, 2/10

total=4/10

man hottness, you said to me that i was a useless fool, i dont mind when people say that about me if they are good but, your not good ok, stop thinking your hot ok, you need to elevate, if you keep on saying shit about other people, eg, your verse suck you wack ass, your a fool! your gonna get banned, just warning you man, no hate..

please return an honest vote on one of the battles below, thx