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Lyrical Prosperity
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Voted For: Spectre
Okay,this cats prone to get disected, infected~
Hes jus like an incompetent dude:cant get erected~
^^^^could have been done better, but not bad 6/10
Shatter ya dome and ya spinal cord in 10 seconds flat~
This wigga lacks, while i clap his trap,this wiggas rhymes sound like a baseball-bat "Wack"~
^^^nice multis, good punch, but slightly strecthed, 7/10
Dislocate every bone and muscle in ya body~
Evaporating ya rhymes chemically and periodically~
^^^good vocab but no punch really, 4/10
not bad, i like you verse, total=17/30
Im like a toolchest sittin on the workbench/
Always on top of things with my tool of choice/
^^^na, wasnt bad 1st line, but second line just killed it, 2/10
Expect the unexpected and get those lenses corrected/
Your readin a masterpiece no need to sauce it up/
^^^not bad but it doesnt ryme!! 3/10
You can (RE)*cycle these lines all you want/
After all your just a su-*spect to me with the added R-E
^^^not bad, but they dont ryme either!! 2/10
you lost it on you last lines man, they didnt ryme!
total=7/30 spectre
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