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Old 10-11-04, 02:18 AM   #13
big GZ
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Voted For: Spektikul

this battle easily goes to an Spektikul...
your flow was good...your structure was good...i like your punchlines (they had me laughing)...and most importantly you were focused on eating this dude alive.

as for ILL-Grammatix...your verse was aight...nothing stood out...u need to be more focused...it seemed as if you were trying to hard to make all of your bars rhyme...next time just focus on meta4's and punchlines becuz that is wut wins battles.

A little word of advice: if you're one of those emcees that take long as shit to write a verse (according to Spektikul), make sure it was worth the time.

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