^ no, it wasn't. first of all, your rhyme scheme is terrible. "whored" and "bored" end rhymes? seriously. pitiful.

secondly, you structure is stretch as hell.

most importantly, you don't understand because you've never had a good line. "im the pimp because you're getting whored"? that's not wordplay. a 7 year old could think of that.

nobody in their right mind besides some halfway retarded 3 year old would think your verse is better than mine. period.

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