i love this beat by da way
good choice
buffering...56gay yes im still on 56gay
aight here it is...off da bat i can tell ur vocals ur too loud...turn it down some...if ur spittin on a computer mic with a stock soundcard go to volume control and put ur mic volume down to about around da middle so u dont clip dat much..(yeah i used to record on a comp mic LOL)anyways...flow is there...just u know get a lil bit hype or just exxagerate some of ur words i guess wat im trying to say is put some feelings to it..feel me?but i other than that i like wat u got here....
keep spittin doggy..
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