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Old 10-11-04, 03:04 PM   #16
Detrimental
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Voted For: Notorious Verses

Notorious Verses wins this one for an all around better verse......it flowed ok.....but sounds like you were rappin with a dictionary.....so good vocab lol.....good punches...had some multies and inners and all of those good things.....good wordplay

Spectre......that was wack.....didn't flow.....it was just wack.....punches missed.....everything was bad except your structure.....elevate
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