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Old 10-11-04, 03:10 PM   #7
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Voted For: ImWhiteUrDead

shit I'mWhiteUrDead wins this just for an all around better verse.....he flowed good.....punches hit.....they weren't ill or anything but decent....structure got messed up i can see...it had ok wordplay and all of that good shit.....keep elevating tho

punchline king you were horrible......that verse was hard to understand.....it ws basic.....structure was bad.....it was all basic.....shit that was a wack ass verse

v/ ImWhiteUrDead
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