Voted For: Myth

okthis was an okay battle

but Myth takes it for the following reasons


Pros and Cons

Myth:
you had nice personals
though the wendy's line is
more of a empire thing now lol

Flow was nice but that's no surpise
the structurewas easy to read
and complexity needs work but its
an overall very nice verse...

RuffRider:

Personals for myth that were used
were highly predicted...should of took
a dfferent route through it
vocab and wod use were a no-no to me
rhymes should no longer be said as a end word

but you had an okay verse ust not a GOOD one


vote/Myth

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