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Old 10-11-04, 10:03 PM   #23
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Voted For: intensify effect

Easy battle to judge...

Its "intence" how my rhymes "efect" ya brain waves
nigga this shits gonna leave you scard and fucked up fo' dayz

ehhh...ok opener... nuffin special

lil faggot ducked when he repped violent type
he was scared of 50th brigade and couldnt live up to his hype

cool personal... stay on him

just anotha bitch made nigga who thinks he can flow
fuckin homo cant even come close to my shit and thats fo sho

pointless... filler line w/self glorification

intensify we know you a fag, your emotions run softly
nigga when you took this battle you should have known it was gonna be costly

no punch... 2nd time ya called him gay already

Intensifyin your effect wont even help you now cuz this shits about done
this niggas on tha run, his tail between his legs, you just a bitch son

a little stretched here... used the play on his name in ya opener in pretty much the same way

aint even got tha balls to stay in violent type when he made himself a fool
been duckin me for weeks nigga and now you layin in tha "dead pool"

already told us he ducked you... that all you got on him?

bitch after this shit our beef will be clean, its all good
cause i know you gonna be to scared to fuck wit me again in my own hood

blah...filler

played ass bitch imma bring it straight old school to end this shit illa
nigga FUCK YOU and you just been MURDAD by tha real lyrical rhyme killa!!!

weak closer... second bar was ya best... everything fell short after that

IE:

you lost in this world of men,boys and emcee.....no mic..4ever a textcee...
you a text book dick sucker so i guess you prefer da term testie (dick sucker )

lol...funny....nice opener...a lil stretched but effective

Beat me? I'll just watch n laugh as ur attempts 'fall short' like midgets in 'high jumping'....
Rhymes bumping...Face it...u 'aint real' enough to 'fuck' with me like 'dry humping'....

lol again... dry humping... not the most original but it's still some funny shyt

im hood atomic, your about nothing like tracks without a put topic..
on stage your the laughing stock of the arena like a good comic.. *haha*

ehhh..ok... no personals so far.. just disses

kid aint seen in crowds like them cats that enjoy peace..
why attempt to deploy me, when this battle is a "walk-throu" un-employee...

blah!... weak bar here

It's over...close the folders...behold...your facing the lyrical champ holder...
Stressed out...?...I'll decapitate you'r head just to take some of that weight off your shoulders...

ok... nothing spectacular

Rhymes heavy as boulders...not agent 'Mulder' but watch as your 'Files' get 'X'd in disclosure ...
Lost your composure...I'd 'snap' on bigpapa by taking 'pics'...just prove that he's nothing but a 'poser'....

nice closer... effective use of multies... nice wordplay... whole verse shoulda hit like this (add some personals next time!)
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