Nice piece here. Kind of a played topic, but you did it well. My favorite lines came at the end...

these cash crooks, cant acquire G's in society/
they pass bucks, i got a higher steez when i apply-a-squeeze/
Nice multis.

The only thing that I would suggest is to add in some more devices such as metaphores or similies.
Ex:
Make it my mission to put cuts and cracks in those...
Emcees who come faker than Michael Jackson's nose
That's just my style though. You have your own. Know what I mean?

Peace