Mona Lisa.
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IP:
Nostradamous-
I liked the piece. The content was good, your wording was aight,
you had a concept and ran with it. Definate potential to produce
good solid pieces. The only thing with a piece like I just peeped
is that it could do with that little bit of irregular/extensive vocab'
to make it stand out more. Complexity isn't always needed but it
was there. Yet I think as a whole it was solid.
Go check in the thread in Crews/Collabs.
Motiv-
Ehhh. You seem funny.. but I wasn't feeling your piece at all.
It seemed to narrow.
A few uses of vocab' here and there but nuttin to shout about.
Just seemed pointless.
Sorry.
Apocalypse-
I'll go and peep it now.
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