Apocalypse this is hard..

I read the piece and I wasn't feeling the first part but
I thought the second part was really good.
I don't know why in the hell you used "..." for a topical lol.
I used to use them to illustarte wordplay bk in 01 lol.
Anyways you had a nice flow, good read and your
contextual writing was consistent.

But because I'm unsure I'll wait for Key Rogue(DV)
to see what he thinks too..

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