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Old 10-11-04, 11:58 PM   #13
shake-spear
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Voted For: *KiRô-æ-PhY§iX*

See my flows blows nigga's of the map like a gurnard//
I murda will words and silence they call me the green-bra//
this wasnt that good of a bar very weak
This dude 17 years of age still battle kids for easy wins//
but this kid is going to be stomped flatter then a L.A fat cap with Tim’s//
wasnt nottin special
See my syntactic spit-in is addiction like cocaine //
Flows so hot it’s starting fire like pro-pain//
to elementry
I’m To miss understood and hard to believe like ufo's//
In dis battle its like boxing cuss am going to damage you with my punches and blows//
also did not move me very much
Cuss my flows will put you in paranoia like a shadow that never appeared//
Blowing emcees up with my flows that get higher then the atmosphere//
no words
See it’s simple to see I slay more emcees then blade slays vampires//
Got your chick on my dick more then a baby on a pass- afire//
ok line
Break all 126 limbs n your body system//
cuss battle me is like medication cuss after it yawl have 126 septum’s//
still not impressin me
And in dis shit all crack your sternum//
Have you saying I for got my flows cuss he don’t want me to burn-him//
that was garbage
And in dis you not herd cuss I’m like a speaker box with 1000 watts//
The closes thing you get to being black is a Dalmatian with black spots//
not very good closer

flow: 6/10
structure: 5/10
punches: 3/10
metas: 3/10
personals: 0/10 didnt see any
overall: 17/50 not very good verse at all u really need to elevate and look dont take this personal jus use it to motivate u call we all sucked at one time.
no hate






aight yo check it ill bing u couldnt be *off the hook* if u were ''fishin-kid''
KiRô* will pull ya brains through ya nose with a hook like ''egyptains did''...|{*cairo}1
not to impressin didnt quite do my research on cairo lol
U.g couldnt pass PhY§iX's if he got an ''A'' in tha class''
like blank math books ya no problem so i ''stay blazin his ass'' 2
nice punch i liked both the lines in this bar
My bars leave aka more cornered than ''stop signs''
his spits are more *run-downed* than ''Rock lines''...| Tha Rock {run down} 3
an alright punch not to shabby lol
ill bing aka U.G is garbage his ''potential is fake''
leav ehim scared to replyt to his oppent like the 1st ''presidentail debate''... 4
good bar i liked it

~finisher~
just one ''question why u testing my game?''
0-9 im ''guessing hes stressing hes lame''
leave this herb *full of holes* like the ''§ in my name''....5
overall the best bar in ya verse liked the closer a lot which prolly won this battle for u

flow: 8/10
sructure: 7/10
punches: 8/10
metas: 8/10
personals: 0/10 didnt see any
overall: 31/50 not bad but i think u can do a lot betta not hate to either one though good battle.
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