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Old 10-12-04, 01:09 AM   #36
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Voted For: Ill-Grammatix

I appreciate the chance to alleviate DV8
Ya intermedi-ate skills ain't good enough for drops I.G. create
NO KINDA WEAK OK THOUGH
Mock Battle Verses?... you pre-write! you thought we wouldn't remember?
Ya entered R.V. a loser still you think you a contender
GOOD DISS I MADE THE PRE WRITE THREAD LOL FUCK YOU ILL LOL GOOD PERSONAL
"Pretend-to-be-sick with words" but I'm the only "Ill-Grammatix"
This faggot's a clone-a baggage of bones with skills extracted
DOPE SHIT GOOD ASS PUNCH
Ya "Mind Kollidez" with mine-ya mental's gettin scrambled
Can't think straight... like homos with pictures of Tevin Campbell (lmao)
OK HOMO JOKES ARE PLAYED
Keep ramblin' on and on about the garbage kats you blow through
They all noobs... ya supposed to win... but this post here exposed you
GOOD ASS PUNCH AGAIN
I coast through ya flow with ease... this text-tease (textee's)
Gettin' "clowned" and knocked down like "Ron" boxin' in "Mickey D's" (lol)
OK
Nigga please... the only way you seeing me is in member mugshots
It must be mosquito season cuz all ya punches feel like love knocks
LOL GOOD PUNCH AGAIN
My hammerin blows leave foes stammerin... doze? I'll finish you
"Pop-eyes" using lethal lines with the same effect that spinach do (ctfu)
DOPE FUCKING PUNCH HERE NICE WORDPLAY
Miniscule kat... Diminish ya raps... ya styles beneath me
Whenever you want another "L" you know where you can reach me!
ENDER NICE GOOD CLOSER
THIS WAS DOPE NICE FLOW GOOD ASS VOCAB NICE MULTIS GREAT PUNCHES AND DISSES 8.5/10

Ya lines waste space n shit, ya Konsept's laced wit distaste, I displace n erase your hits,
Your styles basic, ya only spit ill with grammar when lick’n disease infested novelists clits,
WACK NO REAL PUNCH GOD FLOW AND MULTIS HELPED
herb your trash, you write words i laugh, you phat? .not even when writing on obese hips,
fuck your scripts, you hot? you wouldnt even spit fire if i was lighting grease on ya lips,
LOL FIRE SPIT LINES ARE PLAYED BUT GOOD SHIT FUCK THAT I LIKED IT NICE PUNCH
you wanna go toe 2 toe? you betta be pissin cyphillis in butt ta match my sick ass flow,
ya record shows you lack blows,ya most accomplished wins from a chick dat no-showed,
LOL GOOD DISS SICK LINES ARE ALSO PLAYED THOUGH DAMMIT
i must adress your a mess,you honestly give new meaning to the word to meaning-less,
im not sure whats more pathetic.!..,your text of ya crew being led by a fuckin princess,
LMAO GOOD ASS FUCKING PERSONAL HAHA ILL OWNED!!!
ya drops are neglected, you ILL? .......nah ya shits not even close to being infected,
ya got a false sense of being respected, here ill fix ya verse *DELETE*..!!now its perfected,
OK WACK HERE AND ANOTHER SICK LINE OMG NO !!
ILL's GRAMMA punches like TIX, so my hits'll leave him in knots like little kids shoe laces,
get a grip and take ya trip, cause you don't pack a punch like hawaiin drinks in suit cases,
GOOD PUNCH BASIC BUT DOPE
your gay n strictly ass, youra dick dat wack n you aint in the army to be physical attacked,
its obvious your a fag, dats a skill you grasp, but you shoud really try stayin off that crack,
WACK PUNCH AGAIN
its fuckin obvious dude , but i know U don't have a clue, the only kastrophy in U're crew is U,
U're pussy, in a crew full of fems, that explains why you have momma in your name 2,
WACK AS WELL
who you mad at, your jus a army brat that try's ta pass bad spits as effective static,
its tragic, cause you could'nt even drib-ill (dribble) lethal spits if your name was magic,
GOOD ASS ENDER HER NICE WORDPLAY
FLOW WAS OFF IN SOME PLACES HERE VOCAB WAS GOOD NICE MULTIS ALSO PUNCHES LACKED IN CERTAIN PLACES AND THAT MADE YOU LOSE HERE CUZ YOU HAD SOME REALLY PLAYED CONCEPTS WHILE ILL WAS REAL ORIGINAL AND HIT HARDER.7/10
VOTE-ILL GRAMATICS WITH STRONGER PUNCHES THROUGHOUT HIS VERSE AND A BETTER FLOW

I BEST GET HONEST VOTES BACK THIS IS A LONG ASS FUCKING TYPING

Vote Reinstated.. ILL GRAMATICS did not post in crew forum until 10/12 at around 11am.
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