ay Hazy...I read this piece when i was browsin on HHT, yesterday i think..n I loved it..When i read it on there tho, I dont think you specified that it was written from the perspective of a 5 year old..and i liked it better that way..cuz i didnt see as the view of a 5 year old, i seen it as the view of Hazy..just the little wild-child coming out as the rain clouds did...This piece had mad imagery tho, and the 'beauty of the rainstorm' is always a nice mental image..I dont know, but you took something as simple as sittin out n watchin the rain and demonstrated how meaningful and almost spiritual it can be...really a great concept..the rainstorm giving you the chance to be one with yourself..even if its only for a short while........i could go on all day...let me just say great piece hazy..feelin it as alwayz...stay up with this gyrl..its all luv.
peace.