I actually liked this poem... it was a refreshing look into the perspective of a 5 year old's mentality, it wasn't as dark & gloomy or forcably deep as some of the other poems on this board, the cotton candy lines were my favorite it was an analogy that a 5 year old would say... I think it shows true skill tht you can write a light but impactful peice like this, much luv gurl... peace