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Lyrical Prosperity
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IP:
Voted For: comeback_kid
man yo rymes is unstable like a three legged table
and you backwards like gettin shot wit a knife and stabed wit nine and you got
^^^^mmmm, nice multies, ok punch, 6/10
the nurve to think lyrics is up ta mine dats why my teeth is sharp ....betta ta eat rapas but when i mix paper and ima make you think like seein a glass of
^^^naaa, dont really like that, 4/10
poison and taking a drink but on some real shit you couldnt see me if you had a telescope
^^^not bad, 5/10
total, 15/30, nice verse, first lines are good but second lines dont usually hit as hard, focus on wordplay but not a bad verse, good job man!
Comeback kid, u need 2 come back 2 reality Jerky
Only time u "cumback" is when ya hoes tell u, Ya have Herpes
Murk me? Forget it, Like hell freezin, it'll never happen
just Like ya wack ass gettin props Cuz of tight lyrics u was rappin
^^^nice!!! first few lines, CLASSIC!! very god, 9/10
U yappin at the mouth, spittin sparks instead of fire
While my punches keep rollin like a set Goodyear Tires
^^^ok, but no real personal or punch here, 5/10
I'm the truth, you's the liar, Plus ya illness doesnt exist
I bet the only time u 'spit'...Is after U let go of the Dick...
Trick!! its over I' buried u alive and left U beggin for mercy
Don't U ever....ever ever ever again in ya life try 2 murk me!!
^^^nice finish, i liked it, 8/10
total, 8/10. a1c, your verse was better, but only wit the pnches, keep doing what you do man,good job,
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