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Old 10-12-04, 03:15 PM   #17
Mistic-Rogue
Lyrical Prosperity
 
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From: New Zealand
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Voted For: Reloaded

im gonna shake and bake/
cause i know your little bitch ass is fake/
^^^na, didnt really connect, 3/10
winning this will be a piece of cake/
cause im battling a harmless garden snake/
^^^^na, pretty weak, 4/10
with you im just toyin/
even if you bite back it wont hurt cause you aint got no poison/
^^^^better, 7/10, but you need to work on your flow
come on out that lyrical closet cause we all know that your rhymes are gay/
so just turn around and slither your ass away/
^^^^50/50, need to work on your personals, 6/10

total, 20/40

viper weak verse, i didnt like, vote to reloaded,

please return and honest vote