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Old 10-12-04, 10:46 PM   #15
shake-spear
^TO FEAR OR NOT TO FEAR?^
 
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Voted For: D-ICED

Battle a rap legend in heaven......no this dude is a fraudaulent clone
And his raps spits aint shit almost as wack as his poems
nice personal good bar
Cross him outta quicker then Mase really a waste his brigade in 50th place
An example crews get manhandled and trampled stompped into bannaa paste
good meta in first line nice bar
Crazy playing my record in ya avy is the closest youll come to touching my verse
Cuz in rhyming you like glass shining no matter what youll still always be dirt
good meta and nice punch i liked this bar

flow: 9/10
structure: 8/10
punches: 8/10
metas: 8/10
overall: 33/40



wigga step back while i slice and "D-ICE" ya lyricaly, i cut to tha chase
this bitch got so many aliases hes a lost identity case
good bar nice personal
faggot wouldnt battle me under his real name cuz hes wack newbish
bitch no one likes you, all you spit is rhymes reekin of herbish
didnt like this bar that much kinda weak
your a fuckin joke... nigga get tha fuck outta RV, ill show u tha door matt
oh yeah, before you go... I DO WANT FRIES WIT THAT!!!
nice personal at the end but i think u could have made it betta

flow: 7/10
structure: 8/10
punches: 8/10
metas: 7/10
overall: 30/40


nice drop by both but i think D-ICED took this with betta flow and punches please return the favor wit an honost vote

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