Voted For: Nostradamus

Now to be honest i don't particually enjoy topicals (I'm jus doin this to up my battle credits)...but my vote will be honest

Nostradamous

Topic: "Demise of the Human Race"

(A News reader on the television.)
"We have just recieved a report.. There is a ball of rock hurtling towards the planet that is twice the size of Manhatten.. We do not yet know how far away the asteroid is, however it has been confirmed that it is on a direct collision coarse with the planet Earth......."

"At First Glimpse"
My heart stops with the world, as we hear the breaking news..
A mind blank creates an aura, silence capsulates my moods..
The countdown to judgement day, a psychological nightmare..
My hair stands on its end, as my concience becomes aware..
Of the trauma of this disaster, started off as a normal day..
Now my dreams for the future, within a blink drifted away..
What happens now? Whos to blame? How longs left on the clock?..
Living life now relates to trying to find blood inside a rock..
Transmission cuts, flash back to sitcoms like nothings wrong..
I walk outside, look to the sky, then collapse upon my lawn..

(A specilist's report.)
"It has been confirmed that this rock, upon impact, will strike with the force of over 50 nuclear warheads. It is believed it will hit in a location in the Antarctic region, instantly melting the polar ice caps and sending 100 foot Tidal waves in every direction....."

"Chaos Reigns"
As anticipated, the world reached new~heights~of catastrophe..
Reports of mass suicide, rape, and plenty religious blasphemy..
Hearing gunshots and screams inside homes of peaceful families..
Seeing blood drop in dreams, while stressful anxiety captures me..
This is the world without hope, without laws & social boundrys..
Extreme ways of living, & un-forgiving truths told profoundly..
Our cirtain death drove us crazy, all morals suddenly lost..
We were living on the edge, lines of sanity~already crossed..
Most buildings were randsacked, in days, many militants arrose..
With a new moon formed in the sky, symbol of death.. I suppose..

(A presidents speech to a crowd of thousands)
"We as a people, are at a time of great peril. It is true, that a lot of us will not survive to see the day after tomorrow. So I advise you to stay with your families, as I will be. This will be the last transmission made. Goodbye friends, and may peace be with you."

"The Dawn Of Judgement Day"
The morning was silent, in the aftermath of a violent night..
Many had died, and those who survived confided in suicide..
The world was still, a cold tranquil feeling beneath my feet..
Wandering the streets, full of crashed cars and the deceased..
A backing track, melodic rumble of earth being knocked around..
Gaining ground, the feeling of anticipation becomes profound..
Im scared.. I cant cope.. My stomach fluids inside my throat..
Hearing a crash, taking cover praying for any form of hope..
But as I peer around the corner, I throw up inside the room..
A great tremendous wall of water, spelling my cirtain doom..

"Final Thoughts"
Was the world amazing anyway? So many problems existed daily..
Famine in third world countries, & so much gang violence latly..
Extremist's suicide bombing, the public controled like puppets..
Long hospital waiting lists, extortionists playing governments..
What happened to a world, where we respected our fellow men..
It seems weve become acustomed, to blindly following every trend..
Not to mention money & power, destroying and corrupting lives..
Not realising other people, have their own thoughts & vital signs..
So as my life drifts away, drowning & bones crushed from pressure..
I ponder the worlds problems, wishing to drift off in eternal pleasure..

Death is nothing to us, since when we are, death has not come, and when death has come, we are not.
Epicurus (341 BC - 270 BC), from Diogenes Laertius, Lives of Eminent Philosophers.

/\ WOW is all i can say to this verse dayum how i never enjoyed topicals but this was amazing...the storyline gripped me it's like a movie script the way it was layed out real creative and the quote at the end authenic? yes it is i checked...that there was good lookin...structure wordplay rhyming flow all consistent i'd be surprised if he could top this in his next battle...most definitely be peeping

Schema

The Plan
It all started with a nation's embarassment...Oaths taken in arabic...
Politician's hands shaken with terrorists...
World divided by too many lies...many energized...
Plenty died on both sides...it's the end of friendly skies...
Underhanded plans exchanged...brains with a slant of hate...
Lay in wait like man-o-rays...plannin for gamma rays...
Sleeper cells wait for orders...made it through the borders...
Cant see trees for forest...its allah's plan for us...
It finally arrived...the shipment's late...two nukes in a crate...
Sittin on the inerstate...aint shit to to but sit and wait...
This is hate...a sinner's fate...get a taste...
They got a message for the kids today...

The Cause
TERRORISTS BLEW A TRUCK UP...shit is fucked up...
A nuke blew new york into chunks of bloody rubble...
MOTHERS CLUTCH THEIR BABIES...get incinerated...
Shit is crazy...sin pervaded...give the win to satan...
Buildings leveled...piles of bodies...
Thirty mile wide circle completely disembodied...
Revenge is imm-i-nent..Congress has BEEN wid' it...
Unlimited power to the pres-i-dent...
ICBM's in the air...saudi arabia gone...
Iran, Iraq, Kuwait...all they people is gone...
WE DOIN THE SAME SHIT...we're the terrorists...
Logic is lost...nobodys makin that comparison...
We got hit again and that was it...
Everything we got is in the air again...
Millions is dead...the world's imperial dread...
We destroyin everything like bacterial spread...


The Effect
Earth is scorched...cities is gone...
You wanna survive you better really be strong...
Not everyone's gone...there's a few cats left...
Matter of time till radiation gives you last breath...
The human race is dying...And it's scary in the end...
All this over who had the better imaginary friend...

a nice verse really is all i can say...this isn't a winning verse in my opinion it was jus what all the other topicals are about the layout could've been better the rhyming was aight nice wordplay the story was good but i feel u were beat today a good verse but ya was beaten...sry

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