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Old 10-13-04, 03:08 PM   #63
Mistic-Rogue
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Voted For: Diabolic_aka_134

If this was a chess game this move would b "check-mate"
jus like ya chance in fame all they say is son "your-fake"
^^^nice intro, 8/10
You a poser son your not the "Notorious-One"
Your faker than plastic coated "B.B-Gunz"
^^^that was ok, 5/10
This rap game was just anutha "dream"
like a fat man walking 2 the store n buying whipped "cream"
^^^mmmm, could have been executer better, 6/10

Thos were the best 3 bars, total, 19/30

This Battle You Won't Pass This Test Coz You Aint Got Tha Answers
Ya Death Time Limit Is Shaved Like People Being Cursed With Cancer
^^^^Naaaa, no punch there, weak intro, 3/10
This Deal Is Past It Sell By Date Thats why Your Lines Are Going Cheap
Throwing Your Test Scores At Me Is The Only Time I'll Get A D-Feet
^^^^mmmmm, not bad, 5/10
Imma Make Ya Lungs Burst Call Me Bewitched The Way I Leave Ya Cursed
The Only Time Ya Verse Gets A "W" Is Because You Allways Come Off "W"erse
^^^^haha, nice ending, 8/10

total, 16/30, lines a bit streched! but nice punches, well done

vote goes to diabolical aka 134, better verse, better punches and nice, flow, good battle!

please return and honest vote on one of the battles below!