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Old 10-13-04, 04:11 PM   #4
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aight thanks schema

stephens rhymes are non-significant, im gonna show him his fate
congradulations, your rank is at a steady rate of zero...minus 8*

this kids gangsta persona is fake and played.......it isnt honored
hes gonna need armor, cuz im punishing him like havin bad karma**

try to battle and beat me and see it will exceed your mental capacity
u dont make sense, u drill senseless shit in peoples heads like cavities

your wack raps are more annoyin then white tees with stains
dont you know your gonna lose.......since loss is in your name***

u lack the brain magnitude to make a real verse u should learn some new words...
what i infer,your incapable of writing a real song or poem,u learn from reading my excerpts

*=his rank is -08
**=karma is watever actions u did in life, so if u did bad shit and have bad karma u get punished by somethin divine(god)(and no im not hindu i think karma goes with that religion lol)
***=his name is Elwood, El=L, L is for loss

aight drop your verse honest votes good luck