i think it was good... i think sometimes in your lines you'll overstate sometimes....
example of what I mean:
The glass bleeds and i realize that it is a copy of my cut up face~
My heart is bleeding for somethin unknown that i wish to just escape~

its not bad-- but it reads choppy, you could have said this with less or different words.
You have pretty good description... keep droppin and fuck the hataz.

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