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Old 10-13-04, 06:22 PM   #11
Myth
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Voted For: Lyrical Disciple

Lyrical Disciple: pretty good structure only one stretched line,
nice punches, good meta's specially the squirl one, lol, pretty good flow, few good personals, few multi's, good opener and even better closer. 7.5/10


DeathTearz: overall not a good verse, words weren't rhyming such as knowing/dying, structure was bad, flow was ok, some of ya lines didn't make sense either "your two wins are against newbs who aren't even in a crappy crew" that line would mean he beat respectable emcees, didn't really see any thing that stood out u could elevate all around make ya verse funny, use some better punches, some better meat's, try to learn how to use multi's, elevate all around, ya main problem was words not rhyming such as lesson/season, if ya structure was correct u might have won cause u have words in lines that rhyme with the ending word but that's not how it's susspose to be, u also gave him pros for his open mics in ya verse and in ya explanations. 2.5/10


vote: Lyrical Disciple


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