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Old 10-13-04, 07:35 PM   #17
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Voted For: String9487

strings good opener personal here good ass flow through out the verse good ass punches and disses no plans like prepaied phones dopeness more like a urban legend dope good throughout ender couldve been better vocab also couldve been better still good nice drop here and it read real nice a 8/10
myth forced opener aint flow good and that string lines been used to death lol britney spears line was dope good vocab punches and disses aint really hit hard flow was forced and structure was good the weakness and unoriginality of your punches made you lose here6/10
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