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Better than you..
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Voted For: Eyvon
this was an easy win for eyvon.
ya verse was aiight eyvon you came decent with ya vocab and punches. structure was good some alright wordplay there 2.
poison mate u need to elevate...u had no decent wordplay punches ya verse was all bullshit. no hate mate im just sayin it how i see it aye. your lines need to be longer and u need to make some decent attempts at personals and punches not just rabble.
structure - eyvon
punches - eyvon
flow - eyvo
wordplay - eyvon
vocab - eyvon
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Spit it from the heart, spit a thousand darts, split ya head apart…
Emcees depart, like rubin carter my hurricane left u scarred…
Like a spiked bat grammatical bar, like a wonderland drug…
Tumble - ing like a flagon of rum and 2 blunts, like the funk baby…
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