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Old 10-14-04, 01:55 PM   #7
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Raphael
I'll "cruise by you as if I had a turbo jet cart"...
You "gassed yourself up and you still can't get past the start"!!...
...Drop the quotes...and this was ok....but played...3/10
Even if you waxed the clean, you're rhymes wouldn't shine worth shit...
And hanging out in "Dirty Beans" won't help you have "ill spits"!...
...Fuck no...not even a punch...1/10
Reading your verses is as fun as watching overwatered watching plants grow...
Don't be hyped up for this battle you couldn't even "flow in slow-mo"!!...
....Same as above...1/10
I'll "toss and turn" you, like my garden ceaser salad...
You don't stand a chance vs. me,like challenging a bard to sing out "balads"!
...Wtf are you talking about....are you just trying to rhyme? 2/10 for catching me off gaurd.


Raphael's Verse: 7/40
Comments:
Your opener was the only valid punch in your verse...PUNCHES WIN BATTLES....take out the quotes even your structure and think of witty new concepts....


Quote:
Originally Posted by sdizzle
im schooling this kid and there arent any classes
hes the number one goal.... for rv target practice
Decent....4/10
hes the type of kid
that moms really want to go play in traffic
shit.. his crew is very definition of wackness
..Heh....got a bit of a chuckle..but setup was better than the punch..so same as above....4/10
this fags a little kid, and he still packs lunches
only quotes he knows goes around his wack punches
....Nah...2/10
well u can suck my cock, atleast that way u'd gain fame
hypocrit... silly bitch sporting a sig confronting bad names
...Same as above...2/10


sdizzle's Verse: 12/40
Comments:
Your first two lines were decent...the last two were anus....you know how to battle...Im not even going to suggest shit....


Vote - sdizzle
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