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Old 10-14-04, 02:04 PM   #9
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Originally Posted by final
stephens rhymes are non-significant, im gonna show him his fate
congradulations, your rank is at a steady rate of zero...minus 8*
Ok...good comment...no punch....2/10
this kids gangsta persona is fake and played.......it isnt honored
hes gonna need armor, cuz im punishing him like havin bad karma**
....Same as above....just a bit better....3/10
try to battle and beat me and see it will exceed your mental capacity
u dont make sense, u drill senseless shit in peoples heads like cavities
...Same as above....3/10
your wack raps are more annoyin then white tees with stains
dont you know your gonna lose.......since loss is in your name***
FUCKING EXPLANATIONS!!! 1/10
u lack the brain magnitude to make a real verse u should learn some new words...
what i infer,your incapable of writing a real song or poem,u learn from reading my excerpts
....Couldve been better....3/10


final's Verse: 12/50
Comments:
STOP WITH THE EXPLANATIONS...that makes your punches suck....close all your lines together instead of seperating them...and come up with punches with good concepts...


Quote:
Originally Posted by Stephen Elwood
Sorry i dont try too much, no wonder why nobody loves you,
So ill come half assed... basically 6 levels above you,
Decent....kinda corny and played...3/10
Coming like heavy smokers, ill help you hit the tar bitch,
And yeah im -8........... Yet your trying your hardest,
Feeding = gay.....and not much of a punch here anyway...2/10
You'll never be good, And i learned something, so listen,
Ill leave you with holes... Like the Bronx education system,
Heh...decent...4/10
Got a good mind, has SOME talent, lets see,
He usually comes whack........
.....cept he saved his dope concepts for me..
...Wow..I've seen you do way better than this....3/10


Stephen Elwood's Verse: 12/40
Comments:
You dropped less than your opponent and still tied with him...if you would've matched him you could'a took it easily....but I've seen you do much better....you win for having less lines and still doing as good...


Vote - Stephen Elwood
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