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Voted For: Myth
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myth~good verse overall, flowed well, you had stronger punches then your opponent here, they hit harder, i liked your opener, some decent personals on the name and the thread, my favorite part tho, was your closer, the last two bars were fire, and funny...nice job
soul sickness~your verse was good too, nice struc and flow,,but i think you could have come a little stronger here, with more punches, personals, i liked the forman line and the morman line, but you could have geared this towards your opponent more...but nice job both overall......1
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