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Old 10-14-04, 06:34 PM   #14
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Voted For: disciple05

disciple your shit was decent...opener was dope..that shit was pretty ill..your structure was pretty good...but dont space out your bars keep all your shit together.....your punches was hittin hard....no personals but htis was a dope verse

al capone: too basic dawg...your flow was there and ur structure but thaz about it..ur punches wasnt hittin..no personals...u can do better than that fam..keep it up
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